When I put it in videoscribe (1.3.26) , only the circle of the clock is drawn and then everything else just appears.
When I open it in illustrator, I get an error before it opens so I may not be seeing everything. It looks like there is a clipping path for every path. You probably need to delete all of the clipping paths.
Also, all of your paths are filled outlines (probably made with the paintbrush tool)instead of stroked paths made with the pen or pencil tool which "draw" better.